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CHAPTER 6
CUMMINGS DEVICES
Au revoir. Good bye.
Au revoir, à bientôt. Good bye, until later.
Summary: A. Bonjour (Monsieur).
  B. Bonjour (Mademoiselle). Comment allez-vous?
  A. (Très bien), merci. Et vous?
  B. (Ça va bien), merci.
  A. Au revoir.
  B. Au revoir, à bientôt.

Comments on Example 1

The sentences are of suitable length. The subject matter is appropriate for most groups, and the sentences are all idiomatic. As shown in the summary, ( ) can be filled in various ways so as to make several different conversations.

Example 1 however departs from the format of a classical Cummings device in three ways: (1) It is actually a composite of three such devices, whose basic utterances are respectively (a) Bonjour, (monsieur) (b) Comment allez-vous?, and (c) Au revoir. (2) All of the rejoinders to Comment allez-vous? are practically synonymous with one another, (3) There is only one rejoinder to the last basic utterance. Meaningful choice, and hence communication, are thus impossible in two-thirds of this particular device.

Example 2 (English)

Basic utterance: What is your name?
Potential rejoinders: My name is Bill Williams.
  My name is Clyde Bonney.
  My name is Ethel Redd.
  My name is Carol Singer.
  My name is Fletcher Arrowsmith.

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