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4. being induced by Business to quit the high road, & (toil erased) attempt a very rough Lane, were overturned substituted for were on quitting the high road, & toiling up a very long steep hill through a rough Lane, overturned

8. half rock, half sand added above the line

10. a House for the House

11. first required to take that direction for required to turn that way

15. to pass by for to pass two minutes before
He had grumbled & shaken his shoulders so much indeed, and pitied & cut his Horses so sharply for grumbling so much indeed, & looking so black, & pitying & cutting his Horses so much

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6. not his Masters written above not the Gentleman's own (but only not is erased)

7. had added above line
indisputably become considerably worse for indisputably & evidently become much worse

10. passed erased before left behind
expressing (saying erased) with a most intelligent (and seeming erased) portentous countenance written over as Bad as it had been before the Change seemed to say

13. could safely proceed for had ever thought of proceeding

16. Travellors beleived found themselves at first only shaken & bruised erased before Gentleman