is what these poems by Hung Long Tom are: written pictures. We will use two or three of these in each issue.
Oriental Stories will follow no hard and fast rule as to the spelling of Oriental proper names. The Punjaub or the Punjab, dakaits or dacoits, Sheykh or Sheik—the authors will be allowed full license to follow whatever Oriental spellings they wish. Several of the Oriental languages, notably Arabic, contain sounds that can not be represented in English pronunciation; and to attempt to insist upon any set scheme of transliteration of these sounds would be foolish.
When T. E. Lawrence, who led the Arabs in their successful revolt against Turkey during the Great War, wrote his book, Revolt in the Desert, he spelt the same Arabic words in different ways even in the same paragraph, and his publisher's proofreader objected strongly to the apparent inconsistencies of spelling. A long and entertaining correspondence ensued between author and publisher, and as this colloquy bears directly upon the diversity of spelling of Oriental words which will be found in this magazine, we think a few extracts from that correspondence will be interesting to our readers. The publisher wrote: "I attach a list of queries raised by F, who is reading the proofs. He finds these very clean, but full of inconsistencies in the spelling of proper names, a point which reviewers often take up. Will you annotate it in the margin, so that I can get the proofs straightened?" To this Lawrence replied: "Annotated: not very helpfully perhaps. Arabic names won't go into English, exactly, for their consonants are not the same as ours, and their vowels, like ours, vary from district to district. There are some 'scientific systems' of transliterations, helpful to people who know enough Arabic not to need helping. I spell my names anyhow, to show what rot the systems are." The proofreader queried: "Jeddah and Jidda used impartially throughout. Intentional?" To which Lawrence replied: "Rather!" The proofreader noted: "Bir Waheida was Bir Waheidi." Lawrence replied: "Why not? All one place." Again the proofreader noted: "Nuri, Emir of the Ruwalla, belongs to the 'chief family of the Rualla.' On Slip 33 'Rualla horse,' and Slip 38, 'killed one Rueili.' In all later slips 'Rualla'." Lawrence replied: "Should have also used Ruwala and Ruala." Another query was: "Jedha, the she camel, was Jedhah on Slip 40." Lawrence answered: "She was a splendid beast." Again the proofreader queried: "Sherif Abd el Mayin of Slip 68 becomes el Main, el Mayein, el Mucin, cl Mayin, and cl Muyein." Lawrence commented: "Good egg. I call this really ingenious."
E. Hoffmann Price, one of the authors whose work will be published in this magazine for your dcleaation, comments in a letter to the editor: "Lawrence is right; Arabic can't be transliterated. Of course, a great deal can be passably approximated with Latin letters, but when you come to words involving certain sounds peculiar to the Arabic language, you are stuck. One sound can not be expressed by any letter or combination of letters in our alphabet; although some of the lesser terrors can be closely approximated by comparison with German, as in 'acht.' Worse than that, the pronunciation is difficult to approximate, to say nothing of transliteration. Lawrence was entitled to his little jest. Any Occidental who becomes proficient in that language is entitled to any flights of fancy he may find amusing."
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