Page talk:Amazing Stories Volume 07 Number 08.djvu/57

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Yodin in topic pseudopodsa

unmistabably & unmistably edit

Column 1, paragraph 7 ("Drawing in long breaths...", below the indented song), line 3 has "unmistabably" and "unmistably" instead of "unmistakably". --YodinT 15:13, 27 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

tenacle edit

Column 2, paragraph 8 ("One of the Titanians..."), line 3 has "tenacle", should this be "tentacle" instead? --YodinT 15:13, 27 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

use & as also edit

Column 2, paragraph 16 ("Nevertheless, these amoeba-men...") starts with the following sentence, with two errors on line 3:

"Nevertheless, these amoeba-men, simple as their bodies are, seem to possess powers that make them far superior to use physically as also mentally." (emphasis added)

"use" should be "us". "As also" is also either awkwardly phrased ("as well as") or a typo ("and also"). --YodinT 15:13, 27 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

pseudopodsa edit

Column 2, paragraph 16 (same as above, "Nevertheless, these amoeba-men..."), line 12 (the penultimate line) has "pseudopodsa", should this be "pseudopodia" instead? --YodinT 23:00, 27 November 2015 (UTC)Reply