Page talk:Amazing Stories Volume 07 Number 08.djvu/60

opening quotation mark

The initial quotation mark of column 1, paragraph 5 ("What do you expect...") is a closing quotation mark [”] rather than an opening one [“]. --Yodin^T 19:53, 5 December 2015 (UTC)

full stop

Column 1, paragraph 12 (large initial: "WITH a running leap..."), line 1 ends with a full stop, rather than a comma. --Yodin^T 19:53, 5 December 2015 (UTC)

girl's

Column 2, paragraph 8 ("Realizing the wisdom..."), lines 1 ends with "Brink entered the girl's flyer", going on to line 2; as there are two girls, it should be "the girls' flyer", rather than "the girl's flyer". --Yodin^T 19:53, 5 December 2015 (UTC)