Page talk:Amazing Stories Volume 07 Number 08.djvu/61

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Yodin in topic tell we

to opposite edit

Column 1, paragraph 6 (the last one in the first section, "When it bobbed..."), lines 1 and 2 have "it was halfway to opposite shore": should this be "it was halfway to the opposite shore"? --YodinT 18:15, 6 December 2015 (UTC)Reply

bizzarre edit

Column 1, paragraph 10 ("What in the Solar System...", the 4th paragraph in the second section), line 4 has "bizzarre" instead of "bizarre" (note that the caption to the picture on page 723, which repeats this sentence, has "bizarre", rather than repeating the typo). --YodinT 18:15, 6 December 2015 (UTC)Reply

Let we think. edit

Column 2, paragraph 8 ("Everything you say..."), the last line ends with "Let we think." (should be "Let me think.") and is missing a closing quotation mark. --YodinT 18:15, 6 December 2015 (UTC)Reply

until a formed edit

Column 2, paragraph 13 ("As gently as..."), lines 8 and 9 (just above the final line) have "until a formed a fluid mask", which should be "until it formed a fluid mask". --YodinT 18:15, 6 December 2015 (UTC)Reply

tell we edit

Column 2, paragraph 16 starts with "You don't mean to tell we you've been sleeping here..." (emphasis added); as above, "we" should be "me". --YodinT 18:15, 6 December 2015 (UTC)Reply